As for the writing and the cohesion between paragraphs I find interesting the way he has treated Marta, has a set of guidelines to be followed to have a life Erasmus fun and pleasant, then talked about the requirements and what is necessary to be comfortable in the new city of destination; Finally I made a conclusion and has appointed an appointment as Carpe diem to remember how important it is to live the moment.

As critics might say that Martha should have highlighted more fundamental aspects of life in the new city of destination, such as food. The truth is that travel between cities in the world you realize how different they are human beings depending on where we come from and how differently things are done. In Belgium in this case the food is different, especially in terms of ingredients but is quite good too.

On the other hand had not been too bad to mention important issues such as transport or type of house to live in the new country as in every destination that is completely different. Also should have mentioned how difficult it is to live with ue derentes people diferenets countries and cultures at first then once people know everything is more fun
Also Marta could have mentioned some negative point of what life is like Erasmus. It certainly is an unforgettable experience, but if you want a little help prospective students choose the option that Erasmus should bring them and teach them also aware that not all partying and fun.

In the end I quite liked the article but I found an article more sentimental than practical to conduct erasmus life, gives a good overview of what to do to amuse an Erasmus student in your new destination city, but as I said before I would have liked Marta focus a bit more in areas that could serve for another Erasmus student, also based on his experience as “girl Erasmus”

Javier González López